Friday, March 8, 2019

More Than You Know (Finale)


Six months later,

Muneera 

"امبيه صار شي؟"
Danah said from under her blanket. We were watching a horror movie in the living room of our wing.

I suddenly screamed at a scene that really did scare me and she screamed at my scream which actually made me laugh.

"يالخايسة خرعتيني"
She said, tossing a pillow at me.

Our relationship had evolved so much over the few months.

 It took a bit of work especially for Danah to be open with her emotions, but now I was so happy that we finally had that sister bond I'd been wanting since forever.

Plus she asked me to work with her on some of her dresses whenever she needed help deciding! 

I even told her about Fahad, and she was definitely supportive, giving me tips and whatnot. 

Fahad promised me that once he graduated and found a stable job that he would propose to me. 
He was serious about it and I couldn't wait for it.

Rawan still did not have a clue but Danah told me she was already with someone. And guess what?

My relationship with Danah was infinitely closer than hers and Rawan's. I couldn't believe I was jealous of her before...

Two years ago I'd never expected things to turn this way, but they did and for that I was grateful. 


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Fajer: 

Looking out from the pool of our bungalow I could see the clear sea merge into the sky at a distance. 

Abdullah hugged me from behind and kissed my cheek. 

شتفكرين فيه؟

"شفت البحر شو كبير؟"
I said and he laughed, kissing me again. 

I wrapped my arms around his neck and buried my head in it, inhaling his scent of expensive cologne. 

"مابي ارد"
I said.

"نرد هني السنة الياية"
He said and I smiled.

بس هيا؟"
I said.

"خواتي ما يقصرون معاها"
He said with a chuckle and I smiled.

It honestly hurt me to know that Shoug was so enamored with her new husband that she barely ever saw or asked about Haya, but Haya actually didn't seem mind it. 

She was loving the sleepovers she was having with Layan, the extra attention she got when I brought her along with me to zwara, that I would convince her father to let her stay up a bit past her bedtime. 


I was her fun pass and she loved it, and I loved it too. .

11 comments:

  1. Loved the finale bas the story was too short :( can’t wait for another!!! your blog is One of my favs

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  2. You never fail to impress! Beautiful how the storyline is meticulously crafted for everything to fit together, making it feel so *real*
    Hoping you’d clarify what you meant when you said you would be taking writing more professionally. Wishing you the best of luck but I’m certain that whatever you are planning is going to be great!
    -kn

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    1. Really going to miss your comments KN! 💔💔💔
      Thank you so much wallah! I really want to start writing novels and get into the world of publishing, it's a huge dream of mine!

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    2. I'll be expecting a signed copy then.. :p
      -kn

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  3. Thank you for putting so much effort in writing a truly great story. Words don’t do justice to describe your writing. I can’t wait for when you ‘take writing more professionally’. If what I think it means is what you really mean. Good luck in your life❤️

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    1. Thank you so much for your kind words wallah! It's uplifting comments and support like this that inspire me to keep doing more. Love you guys so much so blessed to have you reading my writing! ♥️

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  4. the ending was amazing i'm literally crying�� even though it was short it was great and please please consider writing one more story and if your not were going to miss you and your amazing chapters your blog and stories bring back a lot of memories 9j one of the best bloggers out there

    -LF

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    1. Hi LF! Thank you so so much it means much more than you think!! ♥️😘

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  5. tbh I really doubt that cashmere will reply, but we do need more chapters/story. I came across your blog yesterday and by today I have binge read all of them. Starting with Niyah & Zaid and ending with Muneera and Fahad

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  6. Hi! Can't seem to log in, but your comment really made my day!! Thank you so so much and stay tuned ;) Your comment is the push I needed. I hope YOU see this, sorry for the late reply!

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